Cool sand nestled between our toes,
holding hands, the shore is crowded—yet,
all we hear are the ocean waves
as the wind nudges rippling grey waters
on top of our sinking feet
inside the belly of the beach.
Oh,
The heaviness of your hand, the
strength of your fingers
gently cuddling mine
connecting our thoughts
sigh,
lifting my face,
blue eyes hidden behind shades,
All I see is the
soft brown of your skin,
the chocolate kiss in your eyes,
hmmm,
the desire to kiss your mouth
so fine.
14 comments:
very romantic! I love it.
Great "brown" take :)
Very sweet and gentle. Nice.
WORD VERIFICATION: corna
DEFINITION: where you be standin' on
"the chocolate kiss in your eyes"
i like that.
Very Elemental! I Love It.! Happy T.T.
steamy jessie...chocolate kisses...and do his lips taste the same?
If romance was a color it would be brown...lovely poem. :-)
softly spoken eloquently and romantically written.
Beautiful TT.
Joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/2010/08/early-to-rise.html
how soothing - when that desire, within reaches is fulfilled, this comes full circle
Oh yes, how I love this particular line (although the whole poem is wonderful!):
"inside the belly of the beach"
This is so romantic, so Burt Lancaster-and-Deborah Kerr-entwined-on-the-beach. Lovely and very steamy.
Lovely and very sexy.
Very romantic! I like it!
Feet really do sink in the sand on the beach. And you can lose your balance there, too - especially when holding hands with one who is soft and brown. ;o)
JESSIE...?
WOW!!
Sexy...Hot...Passionate!
I need a cigarette....:P
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