Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part, just pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
I miss you already.
I haven’t gone anywhere. I’m still here.
Physically yes.
I still answer you.
It’s always on your terms.
You do the same.
I learned it from you.
Okay. What do you want?
I want the past.
That’s not possible. We’ve evolved.
Evolved into what?
The present.
What is our present?
-- silence--
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14 comments:
I love the conversational feel. I think I've been inspired!
Thanks for visiting mine.
Excellent 55 - I really like it! :)
Thanks for reading mine too. :)
This is really good - very engaging. Marvellous work. :)
hummm! beautiful tug of war. What's the present? Good question
Love it!
thanks for your comments :)Sweetie
cold, harsh reality. of love that's died...
A sadness to that one, but excellently written.
Present is a gift. Cherish it!
i see the sound of pins dropping in your future :)
Sounds like an impasse..maybe some counseling would help;)
Clever 55.
Dear pheromone girl, akelamalu, Matthew, Dulce, Shadow, anthonynorth, Mona, LarryG, and Lou,
thank you all so very much for your comments -- i'm glad you enjoyed it. this is especially nice because i really enjoy reading your words as well.
smiles always,
Jessie...
This was one of the better 55's today...I loved it!!
Thank you as well for visiting and commenting on other stories.
You Rock!!!
Have a Kick-Ass Week-End....G
thank you g-man!
i hope you get all 4 days off!!!
smiles,
You humans talk too much. Talk less, cuddle more.
Great 55
This was excellent. Everything about it worked so well. I can't help but wonder how many moments are spent exactly like this - falling into the future that no one wants.
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