Can you tell a story in 55 words?
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Snow Fuels Fire
Outside
Thick snow falls
Blanketing the ground, trees, life;
Inside
Slow jazz, bottled wine
Brightly burning flame
Orange center
Red heat
Surrounding
Our dance
The wick of desire
Melting wax
Slowly
My energy
Building
Sliding down every inch of your tight body
Remaining hard until
Our flames slowly
Thick snow falls
Blanketing the ground, trees, life;
Inside
Slow jazz, bottled wine
Brightly burning flame
Orange center
Red heat
Surrounding
Our dance
The wick of desire
Melting wax
Slowly
My energy
Building
Sliding down every inch of your tight body
Remaining hard until
Our flames slowly
Extinguish
Into our private pool of
Ecstasy
Pic credit: http://ineon4e.deviantart.com/art/candles-means-romance-149645989
Into our private pool of
Ecstasy
Pic credit: http://ineon4e.deviantart.com/art/candles-means-romance-149645989
9 comments:
Passionate today. Nicely done.
Very exciting 55.
Oh my!
JEssie love,
This is the most beautiful 55 I've read today and the best piece of yours!
I love it, I love it!
Hugs!
I need to zip up now! hahaha! That was hot!!
oh wow. the heat off your 55...burns my fingers to leave a comment...i need to get off the computer and get home. lol.
Jessie...?
Love is in the air today Girl!
Or at least...Passion!
GREAT 55 My Dear!
I need a cigarette!
Thanks for this steamy Gem, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
have always loved the snow but only from pictures lol. I use to live in the snow of Colorado and learned to hate it very much.
Thanks for stopping by This Blog Of Mine.I appreciate it when you leave me comments jessi
What a sensual 55!
Wow! The wick of desire melting wax--I loved it. Great post Jessie.
Thank you once again to have peeped in and commented on my poem.
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