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Thursday, December 17, 2009

Flash Fiction 55



Can you tell your story in 55 words? If so, post it and then tell the G-Man.


To make it more interesting, incorporate Raven's words -- which can be found at: http://dragonlairs.blogspot.com/. This week they are: sugar, mortgage, logical, roller skates, outlandish, Yes Virginia, there is a Santa Claus, cummerbund, unexpected, photo album, scarecrow.


Santa, whispering:
“Yes Virginia there is a Santa Clause.

Virginia:
Santa Baby, outlandish mortgage
Upon my tree
Not logical.

Santa Baby, your sugar here
Yes
Beneath my cummerbund,
Santa Baby, scarecrow hat,
Roller skates on
click,
Unexpected photo album you see
Santa Baby, cuddle,
Lean down, whisper

Santa Baby, spread your Christmas cheer
On me.

Now for the version without the 55 limit:


Santa, whispering:
“Yes Virginia there is a Santa Clause.

Virginia replies:
Santa Baby, outlandish mortgage
Upon my tree
Not logical.
But gee…

Oh Santa Baby, pour your sugar
Right here
Oh please,
Beneath my cummerbund,
A taste so sweet,

Oh
Santa Baby, scarecrow hat,
From me, and see
Roller skates
click, click
Unexpected
Memories, for
You and me,
Our photo album for us, to see,

Oh
Santa Baby, cuddle right here,
Close to me,
Lean down and whisper
So soft and sweet,
Seductive words that please,

Oh
Santa Baby, spread your Christmas cheer
On me.







11 comments:

LarryG said...

cheer to you
I love Santa baby!

Brian Miller said...

nice. like your 55 and the longer version even better...hopes he brings everything you are wishing for. smiles.

mine will be up around 8 pm...

Mike said...

Santa baby is a perv! LOL!

Shadow said...

how nice!!!!

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

well, softly spoken, your title invited me here, glad to see you gentle manner and warm spirit shown in your poem.

http://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com
welcome!

anthonynorth said...

That's the right sort of Santa, I think :-)

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Santa is a hard-core rocker!

Dr.John said...

I liked the first version better. Great 55 with hard words.

Fandango said...

Now that was a ghreat 55 out of hard words.

G-Man said...

Jessie....
You are soo cool!
Excellent 55 My Dear.
Outstanding job on ALL challenges today.
Please have a Marvelous Week-End!
Galen

Larry said...

Loved your Santa Baby look forward to next weeks 55.
Have a great Christmas and many many more .
Larry