Six a.m., right on a cue, the untrained voice of Davy Jones sang out, “Cheer up sleepy Jean, oh what can be it mean, to a, daydream believer and a, homecoming queen…”
John rolling over on his left side drawing Jacqueline closer, snuggling under his arm, massaging his toned biceps, Jacqueline whispers, “Good morning sweetheart.”
8 comments:
this is very discreet and sensual I enjoyed reading it...
everybody seems a bit "sexed-up" this week ... lol
or maybe they're just in the mood to talk about it
yes, i've noticed that as well. maybe it's the cold air that seems to be flowing over everything ...??? lol
actually i was in a creative writing course last spring, this is the beginning of my attempt at a short story.
thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it.
:-)
its wonderfully spicey!
aaaah, yes, perfect way to wake up!
wheeww very sensual wake up..much better than my old alarm clock..:)
Pretty. Very subtle. I love these 55 word thingys. It seems like it would be so HARD to do. Do you agonize over every word?
this is great I have wondered what had happened to the story...as far as being sexed up...LOL! That's funny!
Okay enough out of me.
glad to see you -
hope you had a great weekend Jessie.
L
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